Dream Deep

I know Yes too. :P My dad plays the CD sometimes when we're in the car. Seeing as I still haven't said a welcome yet, I'll say it now.. WELCOME ...

Thanks Reichieru. :D I can see your point. (Maybe I should read more? hehehe...)

EDIT : Excuse the double post... o.0

You don't have a samuri sword with which to kill yourself if you were to fail at something (at least I don't think you do...) HAHAHAHA! That's what you think! ...

Thank you, Snoink. My Creative Writing Final has to be done by Monday and I'm nowhere close to being finished with it. I, too, edit too much. I shall use ...

Ah, I like this very much. You write extremely well, Neost. I just found one inconsitancy: Slowly, I back away towards my door and quickly closed it and locked it. ...

I tried reading John Jakes once, which wasn't technically romance, but good God. Teufulshund had the description right, I think... ^_~

Hehehe... If you want to go for a more fragmented effect (I'm not quite sure you do but...) here's my attempt: Some people did know of Najra, but only because ...

You, my firends, are life savers. Thank you thank you thank you thank you. :lots_hearts:

Hi, guys, I could use a little help with something. Below is an excerpt from a story I'm currently writing for school. Some people did know of Najra, but if ...

Good message, loved the first line. The rhyme scheme seemed a little simplistic for such a deep message, though. Maybe change that? Anyway, good job on this. :D

Wow. No. Let me reiderate. WOW. That was amazing. Either publish a book of poetry of I'll give you a whack upside the head. :twisted: That was so good. Kudos ...

Well. Hi. I like it. The fact that you mentioned the "vibrations" you feel through the ball sort of demonstrates the energy of the poem, I think. Also, good description: ...

Ah. Congrats, dele24. You do better than me at this sort of thing. Very well written. I could picture this hapening, but on occasion the dialogue seemed a little bit ...

Proofread the spaces. Now. Get to it. Nice. But these are my feelings over the ending: :smt021 ](*,) :smt062 So abrupt, was there really a point ? Also, just a ...